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I am the Creator from an Empty world.
I see a picture forming behind shut eyes,
I feel my hands open wide,
I know Imagination is the way to bring happiness.

I am the Creator from an Empty world.
I take lines and make them be connective,
I take one dimension and give it perspective,
I take greyscale and give it my colour.

I am the Creator from an Empty world.
I hear it compose itself around me, the symphony,
I listen to the now-polished cacophony,
I smile as I continue to orchestrate.

I am the Creator from an Empty world.
I feel the world take the talent I lent
I watch it develop and I feel content
I am ecstatic to see it growing.

I am the Creator from an Empty world.
I planted the seed, that was simply all
I gave the plant enough to grow tall
I wished to Inspire.

I wish to see something more unfurled.
I am the Creator from an Empty world.
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An "I Am" assignment for my English class. :)

(Except it's now over, so the only writing you'll be seeing from me is whatever I come up with in my very minimal scrap of free time...)

Re-read it and realized it sounds a LOT like *iMAGNi's Engelbaum character, Imagni. Thought it was worth sharing.

((Critique-wise... I feel like the word choice here could use a little tweaking. Particularly what bothers me is stanza 5, lines 2 & 3, as well as line 4 of stanza 1. Also, does the ending sound all right? I originally had the lines reversed.))
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Fue una poema "Yo Soy" para mi clase de íngles. :)

Cuando la leí otra vez, me pareció que sonó como el personaje de *iMAGNi, Imagni. Pensaba que debo compartir.
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Awesome poem! I can't explain all my feelings, but this poem is so inspiring! :heart:
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~StarsOfCASSiOPEiA Jan 31, 2011  Student General Artist
:heart: I am so happy you think so! :) Your art is as well, I was visualizing some of your Imagni works when I re-read this. :love:
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~JettieHier Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohwww, great!!!! I really love the rytm in it.
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~StarsOfCASSiOPEiA Jan 31, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! I had fun with the rhythm. :D
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~followmeimlost Jan 30, 2011  Student Writer
Beautiful! Reminds me a lot of myself in some ways... I simply love it!
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~StarsOfCASSiOPEiA Jan 31, 2011  Student General Artist
I figured it was a deeper way to express my creativity- I can see why you relate to it so well, definitely. :)

Thank you so very much! :love:
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~followmeimlost Jan 31, 2011  Student Writer
Yes, I believe a lot of artists relate to things like this!

You are welcome!
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